The pie charts illustrate the total production of electricity measured in units and divided by different sources of fuel in Australia and France in the year 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts illustrate the total
production
of electricity
measured in units
and divided by different sources of fuel in Australia
and France
in the year
1980 and 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
It is clear that
major fuel sources utilised in electricity
production
were different in Australia
and France
.
According to
the picture Australia
produced 100 units
of electricity
in 1980 and 170 units
in 2000 while
the production
in France
was 90 units
and it doubled in the year 2000 in comparison with the
Correct article usage
apply
France
.The figures were ninety and 180 units
respectively.In Australia
, coal was the main source of electricity
production
and half of the total electricity
produced came from coal in 1980.Natural gas and hydropower contributed of
producing 20 Change preposition
to
units
of electrical charge while
remaining
10 Correct article usage
the remaining
units
Add a missing verb
were wasproduced
wasproduced
from oil. It could be noticed that the dependency on coal increased in 2000 for electrical energy manufacture,Correct your spelling
produced
whereas
oil and natural gases were very minimally used for generation.
Meanwhile
in Add a comma
,Meanwhile
France
native gas and ember together produced half of the electromagnetism in 1980.The utilise of nuclear power increased significantly in Add a comma
,France
France
in 2000 amounting 126
number in Change preposition
to 126
this
year compared to the fifteen units
20 years back
.Rephrase
ago
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