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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of the destination of export goods in three distinct countries, in 2010.

The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of the destination of export goods in three distinct countries, in 2010.
#percentage #destination #export #goods #three #countries
The pie chart shows the number of
the
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destination
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destinations
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of
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 export goods, in Argentina, Mexico and Chile in 2010.
Overall
, it witnessed Mexico send a huge amount of goods to the USA and minimal perlage to other Countries. Argentina and Chile were exported
similarly
 in
the
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 period of time.
To begin
 with Argentina had Ob proportion to Latin America at
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the
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38% beginning, followed by Europe was 26%. The USA and others were at
unday
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Sunday
 20%,
whereas
, the USA accounted for the highest percentage of freight from Marico at 62%
..
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 It was the dominant country controlling two-thirds of the markets and other Countries were at 10%.. In the same year, geographical split of exports, Latin America obtained a whole of 31% from
chile
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Chile
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 followed by Europe
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which increased
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 their
importe
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imported
imports
at
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 30% and
remaining
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the remaining
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 courting
holded
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held
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 less than 20%
in
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at
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 the end of the year in 2010.
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