The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000, and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the size of the global population from 1400 to 2000, and the pie charts show the global population by region in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The displays graph shows the size of the global
population
from 1400 to 2000, and the pie chart shows the global
population
by region in 1900
as well as
2000. In 2000, it is in 6 billion , the highest global
population
was 54% in Asian Pacific ( including former soviet Asia), in Europe it was 14% ( including Russia), in North ,
America
it was 5%, in Africa it was 10%, in the Latin
America
& Caribbean it was 8%, in the Middle East and North Africa it was 3% and in other it was 3%. In 1900, it is in 1.6 billion The highest was in Asia with 60%, in Europe it was 25% ( including Russia), in North
America
it was 5%, in Africa it was 4%, in Latin
America
it was 3% and in other it was 3%.The data is given in Billion.
To conclude
, the highest in 1900 and 2000 is in Asia. The above information describes the global
population
.
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