The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between! 1980 and 2012.
The line chart illustrates the amount of
electricity
produced by different sources of Use synonyms
power
in Use synonyms
terawatt
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hours
over the period of 32 years. Generally speaking, nuclear Use synonyms
power
is by far the most important in generating Use synonyms
electricity
,Use synonyms
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however
renewable Add the comma(s)
,however
power
is almost the least Use synonyms
electricity
production
In 1980, Thermal Use synonyms
power
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is
used to produce over 100 Wrong verb form
was
terawatt
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hours
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, almost below 50 Linking Words
terawatt
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hours
was produced by Hydroelectric and nuclear Use synonyms
power
stations. Use synonyms
In addition
, renewable Linking Words
power
was a negligible source in the mentioned period . Use synonyms
between
1980 and 2012, nuclear Capitalize word
Between
power
dramatically rose in generating Use synonyms
electricity
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while
the thermal fell in producing Linking Words
electricity
to nearly 40 Use synonyms
terawatt
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hours
. Hydroelectricity remained stable through the given period. Use synonyms
Finally
renewable was the only source which did not clearly increase until 2015 .Linking Words
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