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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gilding fo mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that people put in danger their lives
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. It
it
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 undeniable physical activities
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 become an essential part of our life.
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, there is no absolute agreement as some people find extreme
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 beneficial,
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 others consider everything associated with radical acts negatively. Surely, there are pros and cons to that kind of
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, but I believe
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 outweigh
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. One of the main positives of extreme hobbies is that they make you feel alive.
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, when a person is stressed,
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, he starts to feel lethargic and lifeless. So he needs some kind of action that would force him to "rise from the dead". Another advantage is that
as a result
 of
such
 sort of
exercises
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 body releases
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 called Adrenalin, which fastens the blood circulation and the other glands start to release hormones
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 as dopamine, which increases
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happiness. So,
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 an individual enjoys the activity and is eager to feel that again. Turning to the other side of the argument, those activities may not always end
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. Usually, in extreme
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 everything happens super fast and
human
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humans
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 can not always keep up with actions. There are so many times when a person gets hit severely,
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 paralyzes their body and leads to lamentable
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. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to
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 conclusion that, having extreme activities from time to time is actually good for one's health, but everyone needs to follow the safety rules and make sure that they don't neglect their
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lives
 with the belief that nothing will happen.
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