The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates a guideline for
electricity
production in a hydroelectric power station. As a part of this
station name, the word 'hydro' refers to using energy which comes from water
and this
diagram shows every step of manufacturing electricity
by it.
As it
can be seen, the river Correct pronoun usage
apply
water
comes into a container named a high-level reservoir
. The gathered water
in the container flows
in the day from intake.This
intake is closed at night. During the day- time, water
flows
to generate electricity
. When it arrives at the power station, it flows
into the reversible turbines
. These turbines
are occupied with manufacturing electricity
by their movements and storing the produced electricity
in the generator in the day-time. These turbines
also
operate a pumping water
mission into the high-level reservoir
.
Meanwhile, turbines
produce electricity
and store it in the generator, the electricity
which was produced before is reachable to the national grid by power lines. At the end
of the journey of water
, water
which is used for electricity
production flows
by the gate to a low-level reservoir
in the daytime.However
, the water
which had been stored during the daytime at the low-level reservoir
is pumped up by turbines
to the high-level reservoir
at night.Submitted by hedoyeraisy on
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