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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is a common belief some scientists encourage
children
 should start learning a foreign
langguage
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language
 at primary
school
 but
however
 ,I firmly believe that
children
 at primary
school
 very young age
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in order
inorder
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. On the one
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 There are too many disadvantages when
children
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begin learning a foreign
language
 at primary
school
.First of all, mandating
children
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new
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language
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 home. On top of there , learning a foreign
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 tongue it being full makes
children
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mental.
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learning a foreign
language
 at primary
school
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Firstly
 , some people
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argue
agree
 that younger
children
 in age brain development should it can acquire new knowledge.For another,
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as to the kids learning a foreign
language
while
 they must learn mother tongue ,that will help them develop memory and have a good foundation in
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kids can take advantage of
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 cartoons and
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 with mom and dad in
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other languages.
To sum up
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while
 it is apparent that learning a new
language
 at primary
school
 has its own pros and cons. It might help kids develop their learning skills and strengthen their multitasking ability,
while
 it will put added pressure on them and be confusing
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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