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The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data illustrates the two phases in the progress of the mobile
phone
.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is the great difference between the appearance and weight of an early mobile
phone
 and the contemporary mobile
phone
. Early mobile phones used to have antennae and weigh around 150g,
it
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 is far heavier, bigger and thicker
in contrast
 to the other cellphone, which only weighs around 70g and has a size of 90mm x 40mm to 130mm x 50mm ,respectively.
Furthermore
, old phones only had a few key functions and possessed a black-and-white display.
On the other hand
, the contemporary mobile
phone
 model which is a flip
phone
 is slicker and has a full-colour display. It is capable of taking pictures and videos.
Moreover
, it
also
 has extra features
such
 as access to the internet, access to emails, a music player and a multi-player game facility.
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