Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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One of the highly debated topics in higher

education

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is the role of

governments

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, some hold

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view that

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governments

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should cover the entire tuition

fees

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for students pursuing

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university

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a university

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education

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.I somewhat agree with

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point of view,

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there are some compelling reasons to support full government payment of

university

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fees

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essential to acknowledge the potential

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drawbacks

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the following

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covering tuition

fees

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can make higher

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accessible to individuals from all economic backgrounds,

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, for

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individuals

from rural areas, who may not have the opportunity to pay the rent

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accomodation

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accommodation

, authorities should provide an environment allowing those with potential and ambition to pursue higher

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, the financial burden on

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shoud

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should

be taken into consideration, which can

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other crucial

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public

services and initiatives.so they have to

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maintain

a balance among these needs.

the

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other thing is that

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there is a concern that, if tuition

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are fully covered, some students may follow

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without a genuine commitment to learning and

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may

leads

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to misuse of sources that

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university

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universities

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provide for them.

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apply

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this

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issue should be

cosidered

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considered

at universities.

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, the question of whether

governments

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should fully cover

university

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fees

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is a

multifaced

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issue. That can benefit

individuas

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individuals

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and society,

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critics highlight the financial challenges and potential misuse

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resources.

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I agree in favour of covering

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governments

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, balancing these factors will be essential in creating a higher

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that is

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both accessible and sustainable.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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255 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Higher education
University tuition
Public good
Economic growth
Fiscal responsibility
Merit-based scholarships
Need-based grants
Socioeconomic status
Educational equity
Income-contingent loans
Graduate tax
Financial aid
Student loans
Subsidize
Taxpayer funding
Underappreciation
Workforce development
Access to education
Higher learning institutions
Government expenditure

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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What are the advantages and disadvantages while living in cities carry out them and give your opinion

Some people think it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter: -apologize for not attending -explain why you did not attend -say what you will do to make up for it