You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -Explain why you want to take time off work -Give details of the amount of time you need -Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Thomas, I’m writing to let you know that I will need

time

off work next month. As for the

time

off work I need, let me explain to you why it is so important for me. My mother needs to go to the hospital in Sydney and I would like to take care of her and go with her to

this

important operation. So, I will be happy if you can accept to let me two weeks off – one for the operation and the other one for the recovery.

This

time

off will start on the 5th of June. Anyway, I would like to suggest how I could cover my work during

this

period of

time

. My principal clients already know about my temporary absence and will be happy to have

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conference with me. Really grateful!

In addition

, my secretary Anouck has the skills to call the suppliers. And

then

, I will supervise every evening with you! Please let me know if you require any

further

information and hope you will accept my request! Best regards, Tony

Submitted by tony.vantroo on Sun Sep 10 2023

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