You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -Explain why you want to take time off work -Give details of the amount of time you need -Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Thomas, I’m writing to let you know that I will need

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off work next month. As for the

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off work I need, let me explain to you why it is so important for me. My mother needs to go to the hospital in Sydney and I would like to take care of her and go with her to

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important operation. So, I will be happy if you can accept to let me two weeks off – one for the operation and the other one for the recovery.

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off will start on the 5th of June. Anyway, I would like to suggest how I could cover my work during

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period of

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. My principal clients already know about my temporary absence and will be happy to have

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conference with me. Really grateful!

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, my secretary Anouck has the skills to call the suppliers. And

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, I will supervise every evening with you! Please let me know if you require any

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information and hope you will accept my request! Best regards, Tony

Submitted by tony.vantroo on Sun Sep 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

180 words

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