The given three pie chart compares the average spending on four kind of food by people in China, India and all over the world in the year 2008 period.

The given three pie chart compares the average spending on four kind of food by people in China, India and all over the world in the year 2008 period.
The three pie chart compares the average spending on four kinds of
food
by people in China,
India
and all over the
world
in the year 2008 period.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that people in
both
countries and the
world
spent the most money on processed
food
.
In addition
, spending on
Nuts
and
seeds
was low in
both
the nations and the
world
.
According to
World
, processed
food
spending highest, stood at 41%, compared to 34% and 39% in China and
India
.
By contrast
, the
world
accounted 4% of consumer for spending,
while
the statistics for China was just 34%, which was 5% lower than that of
India
. During the same year, the payment for Vegetables and Fruits in the
world
was 29%, which was higher than the figure for
India
(23%) and lower than that of Japan(32%). In terms of Animal
food
and
nuts
and
seeds
, family in the
world
used their money 26% for
food
,
while
the figure for spending on these items was 11% higher in Japan and 1% lower in
India
. In the whole
world
,
Nuts
and
seeds
spending lowest but
both
nations still growing normally.
Nuts
and
seeds
accounted for the percentage of spending in the
world
at 4% which was spending higher in
both
Japan and
India
between 19% and 11%.
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