On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter -describe the item you lost -Explain how you lost it - tell the insurance company what would you like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I recently lost a valuable item and would like to inform you of the loss.
Firstly
, as far as the item I lost is concerned, It is a large red suitcase that I bought
last
year for my wife’s birthday, resulting in the fact that It is pretty sentimental for us.
Furthermore
, the suitcase has rolls and AC/DC stickers.
On the other hand
, to some extent, let me explain to you how we lost it. First and foremost, we were on the train for Sydney at the peak time, on account of the fact that it was overcrowded. When we wanted to jump out at the station, unfortunately, we forgot to grab the suitcase
due to
the fact that we missing time. It was busy.
Last
but not least, I would like to do, in accordance with our contract, that you give us a refund in order to send you the receipt. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any
further
information. Kind regards, Mr Van
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