The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
The chart illustrates how often American 25 percentage of
people
ate in fast food restaurants in the usa
from 2003 to 2013.
In general, a lot of Correct your spelling
US
people
frequency
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frequently
of eating
at once a Wrong verb form
eat
week
and once or twice a month more than every day and never did not eating
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eat
people
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, the most of people
almost 32 % of people
eat
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week
in 2003 but in 2006 people
who eat
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week
grown
. In 2013 who eat once a Wrong verb form
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by
people
. People
who eat
every dayWrong verb form
ate
4
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percentage
in 2003, but in comparison in 2003 more than a little bit Replace the word
per cent
grown
in other years. Wrong verb form
grew
People
who eat never
approximately the same Add a missing verb
are never
of
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as
people
who eat every day.Submitted by mawka974 on
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