The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Advocates for and almost always injects
safety
awareness into business activities. Champions safety
metrics and processes and identifies improvement
areas
. Swiftly reports safety
issues and communicates improvement
areas
to others. Proactively incorporates safety
procedures and prevention into initiatives and offers detailed areas
for improvement
. Champions positive driving behaviors
, Change the spelling
behaviours
awareness
sessions, and communicates Correct word choice
and awareness
areas
of improvement
and corrective measures to reduce negative driving behaviors
on and off the job. Adheres to GI 6.030 and Change the spelling
behaviours
educate
others.Correct subject-verb agreement
educates
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