The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below housework
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percentage
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households
with electrical appliances and the number of hours spent doing housework in Use synonyms
households
in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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, the Linking Words
percentage
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households
electrical appliances rose.Change noun form
households'
household's
while
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the amount of hoursRemove the comma
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of
decline
.
In1920,the number of using Wrong verb form
declined
refrigerator
was 0.Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
However
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in180
it increased sharply to 100 and Correct your spelling
in 180
then
remained stable.In 1920, the Linking Words
persentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
households
with vacuum Use synonyms
cleaner
was 30 and went up to 100 in 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Whereas
, in 1920, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
households
with Use synonyms
washin
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washing
washin'
machine
was 40. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Then
, it fluctuated and Linking Words
finally
rose to over 70 in 2019.
The Linking Words
amount
of hours of work per week was 50 per week in 1920, and it fell sharply to 10 per week in 2019. In 1940, the Change the quantifier
number
persentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
households
with Use synonyms
refrigerator
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refrigerators
the
same as the Add a missing verb
was the
percentage
of Use synonyms
households
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vacuum
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with vacuum
cleaner
and washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
almost 50. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
In addition
, In 2000, the Linking Words
persentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
households
with Use synonyms
refrigerator
and the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
percentage
of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
households
vacuum Change the noun form
household
cleaner
were ,higher than the number of household washing machines.Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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