The pie charts show the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in a typical week. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts demonstrate the

first

sources from which Germans and Nigerians get their

news

, with the unit of measurement being percentages. It should

also

be noted that only those living in urban areas of Nigeria were studied in

this

survey.

Overall

, the charts indicate different preferences of people from the two chosen countries regarding where they

first

look for the

news

, with newspaper and TV being the most popular

news

sources in Germany and Nigeria, respectively. One of the most prominent details observed from these charts is that almost half of the Germans surveyed (45%) selected newspapers as their

first

news

providers

while

just slightly above a tenth of the Nigerian urban population (13%)

access

Wrong verb form

accessed

show examples

the

news

this

way. It is

also

apparently clear that TV is the most common place where people

initially

search for current affairs in Nigeria, with almost two-thirds of Nigerians favouring the “TV” category, doubling the same figure of Germany at 30%. Noticeably, more than a fifth of Nigerians questioned (22%) come to the radio in the

first

place to get their

news

whereas

only 10% of Germans access new information using the same device.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

192 words

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The pie charts show the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in a typical week. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Globalizaion is creating a world with a single culture and destroying national identity in the process. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For centuries, important parts of education have remained, such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills be made us a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?