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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the number of robbed
cars
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 in four countries: Great
Britain
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, Sweden, France, and Canada.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Great
Britain
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 had the highest rate of stolen vehicles among the four countries from 1990 to 1999.
According to
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 the lines given, the most theft
cars
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 were in nearly 1993 and 1997 that were at 20000
cars
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 (both were in Great
Britain
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).
However
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, the least theft
cars
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 were in almost 1994 and 1998 which were 5000 in Canada.
On the other hand
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, the lines for France, Canada, and Great
Britain
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 showed some fluctuation that was the opposite of Sweden which was surging gradually. In conclusion, the robbery of
cars
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 never ends but can decline in all countries.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, britain with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theft rate
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • vehicle theft
  • per thousand vehicles
  • decade
  • steady increase
  • steep decline
  • comparative analysis
  • noteworthy changes
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