Some people believe that global warming is today’s most pressing environmental problem. At the same time, some consider deforestation to have the most devastating impact on the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion on the same.
Nowadays there is constant debate on
enviornmental
problems Correct your spelling
environmental
however
global warming and deforestation is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
on
the top of the list. Some people believe that overexploitation of Change preposition
at
forest
is Fix the agreement mistake
forests
major
concern to Add an article
a major
Correct article usage
the enviornement
enviornement
Correct your spelling
environment
while
some argue that global warming is main
problem that we have to look after. Change the article
the main
This
essay will further
elaborate the
effects of each and will reach to conclusion.
To commence with, Global warming Change preposition
on the
driven
by the excessive emission of greenhouse gases Add a missing verb
is driven
such
as carbon dioxide. Which leads to rise
in Correct article usage
a rise
temprature
. Correct your spelling
temperature
For example
, exceesive
use of Correct your spelling
excessive
fossile
fuel Correct your spelling
fossil
release
Change the verb form
releases
huge
amount of carbon dioxide.Add an article
a huge
Hence
it leads to higher temprature
.Correct your spelling
temperature
temperatures
Secondly
, global warming increases heatwave that melt
polar ice Change the verb form
melts
Correct word choice
and alslo
alslo
it Correct your spelling
also
rises
the sea level. Correct your spelling
raises
Therefore
it disrupt
the ecosystem. Change the verb form
disrupts
Furthermore
, disruption in ecosystem
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the ecosystem
results
food and water scarcity. Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
Moreover
, it causes loss of diversity and ocean acidification.
On the other hand
, deforestation causes many negative effects to
Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
the enviornment
enviornment
including global warming. To illustrate, when someone Correct your spelling
environment
cut
down the forests or Wrong verb form
cuts
tress
, carbon dioxide within tress Correct your spelling
trees
release
Replace the word
released
in
the air. It results in Change preposition
into
greenhouse
effect which leads to global warming. Another point is , Correct article usage
the greenhouse
it
Correct word choice
that it
reduce
the rainfall and breaks the water cycle. Because of Change the verb form
reduces
this
, loss of habitate
for various species happens. Correct your spelling
habitat
habitats
lastly
, it Capitalize word
Lastly
also
causes soil erosion.
To summarise, by agglomerating all the points aforementioned above one can reach to conclusion that deforestation is the
major issue for Correct article usage
a
Correct article usage
the enviorment
enviorment
as it increases global warming too. Correct your spelling
environment
Add a comma
,however
however
in my opinion , we can combat Capitalize word
However
this
issue by implying some basic rules as well as
aforestation program.Submitted by bhumikashah1414 on
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