Some people believe that global warming is today’s most pressing environmental problem. At the same time, some consider deforestation to have the most devastating impact on the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion on the same.

Nowadays there is constant debate on
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environmental
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global warming and deforestation
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the top of the list. Some people believe that overexploitation of
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is
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concern to
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the enviornement
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environment
while
some argue that global warming is
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problem that we have to look after.
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effects of each and will reach to conclusion. To commence with, Global warming
driven
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by the excessive emission of greenhouse gases
such
as carbon dioxide. Which leads to
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in
temprature
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temperature
.
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,
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excessive
use of
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fossil
fuel
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huge
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amount of carbon dioxide.
Hence
it leads to higher
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temperature
temperatures
.
Secondly
, global warming increases heatwave that
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polar ice
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and alslo
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alslo
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also
it
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the sea level.
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it
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the ecosystem.
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, disruption in
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results
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food and water scarcity.
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, it causes loss of diversity and ocean acidification.
On the other hand
, deforestation causes many negative effects
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the enviornment
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enviornment
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environment
including global warming. To illustrate, when someone
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down the forests or
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trees
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, carbon dioxide within tress
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in
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the air. It results in
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the greenhouse
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effect which leads to global warming. Another point is ,
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reduce
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the rainfall and breaks the water cycle. Because of
this
, loss of
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habitat
habitats
for various species happens.
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, it
also
causes soil erosion. To summarise, by agglomerating all the points aforementioned above one can reach to conclusion that deforestation is
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major issue for
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environment
as it increases global warming too.
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in my opinion , we can combat
this
issue by implying some basic rules
as well as
aforestation program.
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