The graph below show the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

The line graph illustrates the percentage of Paper &

cardboard

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and cardboard

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,

Glass

containers

, Aluminium

cans

and Plastics recycled between 1982

to

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and

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2010 in a specific region.

Overall

, it is observed that

reprocess

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the reprocess

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rate

is increased for all the four materials considered

however

Aluminum

cans

recycling

rate

was increased by

greater

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a greater

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percentage.

To begin

with, both Paper &

cardboard

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and cardboard

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and

Glass

containers

showed

a

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apply

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multiple variations over the period considered.

Initially

,in 1982 Paper &

cardboard

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and cardboard

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rate

was 65% and

further

it presented an increase and decrease in the subsequent years and

finally

resulted in 70% in 2010 which is 5% greater than the value from 1982.

Similarly

,

Glass

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the Glass

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containers

' process

rate

in 1982

is

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was

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50% and it decreased

untill

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until

1990 and gave

a

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an

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increased trend till 2010 when the percentage was 50.

Finally

, Aluminium

Cans

and Plastics had shown a

similiar

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similar

trend of addition of the next year compared to

those prevoius year

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that prevoius year

those prevoius years

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.In the year 1986,

Aluminium

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the Aluminium

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cans

rate

was 5% and in 2010 it was 45%. In the same

way

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,way

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Glass

containers

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container's

containers'

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value was 5% in 1990 and was about 10% in 2010.