The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been stated that science should be used to advance human lives. I personally agree with the given argument and in the following, I will explain my point of view.

To begin

, science has to be in line with codes of ethics to avoid misusing it against humans. I mean that the results of research should not jeopardize the safety of mankind and spread a critical environment on the earth.

For instance

, with the help of high technology, military equipment should be used to keep a nation protected

instead

of starting a war with other

countries

because of undesired greed.

Consequently

, scholars should dedicate their efforts to have a positive influence on society.

Moreover

, it is important that

countries

share their developments together in order to mitigate the living conditions around the world. Developed

countries

should support poor nations as they need to invest financially and technologically.

As a result

, the

overall

living conditions will be almost equal around the world. If rich

countries

do not share their science with others, the variation between them will increase dramatically as

this

state causes deleterious consequences for both nations.

For instance

, in recent years, Iranians have immigrated to Turkey more than in the past.

As a result

, there is a poor population trend in Iran and there is a shortage of facilities including houses and jobs in Turkey. In conclusion, I believe that the results of scientific works should promote safety around the earth as these technological developments need to be exchanged between

countries

, in order to have equality in living conditions around the world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

264 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: <4

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: <4

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

crucial role
enhancing
quality of human life
advancements
medicine
healthcare
scientific research
solving societal problems
improving living standards
global issues
climate change
food scarcity
technological advancements
limitations
negative consequences
ethical considerations
sustainability
environmental preservation

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