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A company has announced that it is wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your country. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

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People
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 have argued about the plan to build a
factory
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 near the residential
area
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. Some
people
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 think that it will bring many benefits to the local society,
while
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 others believe that it will have a negative effect on the environment. The following essay will discuss in detail the advantages and disadvantages of it. On the one hand, it is true that building a new
factory
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 near the local residential
area
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 will bring a lot of benefits for many parties.
Firstly
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, it will generate a lot of job opportunities for the local
people
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. It is common that a
factory
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 will absorb many employees, and for efficiency, it will give priority to hiring local
people
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.
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, the plan will boost the economic development of its surrounding
area
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. Many investors will build mini markets, gas stations or restaurants as many of the
factory
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's workers will seek these commercial places.
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, it will positively affect the real estate business of the surrounding
area
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 as well. But I believe the
people
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 of my locality are happy with their current economic condition. My
community
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 is a beautiful and calm
area
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 with almost negligible pollution. My
community
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 would be harmed by a large
factory
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.
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, the
factory
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 will destroy the calm and neat environment
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 will increase the air, water and sound pollution. In the long run, the environment will be seriously hurt and
people
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's health will be affected. Again the newly created
factory
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 will make the
community
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 crowded. To accommodate more workers more homes will be needed. I don't want to see too many cheaply constructed townhomes in my locality. I heartily believe
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 growth will change my
community
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 too much. I was born here and most of my memories are of the
area
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. I love my
community
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 very much. I feel that the dangers of the
factory
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 are greater than the benefits. So I would strongly oppose the idea of establishing a
factory
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 near my
community
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.
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