You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the world
food
and oil
prices from 2000 to 2011 in which the food
price
was measured under points
whereas
the dollar was the unit of oil
price
.
Overall
, the two subjects showed an increase in the price
over time. Furthermore
, it worth
mentioning that the Add a missing verb
is worth
food
index and oil
price
expressed similar trends between 2000 and 2011, so that 93.6% correlation is suggested.
In 2000, the food
price
stood at nearly 90 points
whereas
the average oil
price
was roughly 25$. In the period of the next 6 years, although
seeing the same trend of fluctuation, the price
of oil
seemed to be more fluctuated than food
. In 2007, the food
price
reached at
about 130 Remove the preposition
apply
points
and estimated
55$ per Correct article usage
an estimated
oil
barrel was showed
.
In the interval of 4 years from 2007 to 2011, the two lines witnessed a strong correlation. Between 2007 and 2008, the Wrong verb form
shown
food
price
rose to over 220 points
whereas
the price
of an
Correct article usage
apply
oil
barrels hit its peak of about 135$. In the
early Correct article usage
apply
of
2009, both of them showed their lowest point of the period when the former plummetted to 140 Change preposition
apply
points
and each oil
barrel fell to the lowest price
of over 40$. In 2011, the food
index increased to nearly 240 points
and the oil
price
was around 100$ per barrel.Submitted by linhng28122001 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, oil, price, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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