Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that higher education is essential for career progression and better job prospects, nowadays.
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some
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university
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believe that they need to
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supplmentary
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supplementary
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with their main curriculum, others argue that they should focus on their main
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essay, I will discuss both arguments and explain why I agree with the former statement. Those who believe that university
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should give all their attention to studying just
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finishing
their education argue that learning other
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unrelated to their main field of
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may distract them from doing what they are supposed to do in their
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years,
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,
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may lead to taking too long to graduate and
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negatively impacting their professional careers.
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, I would argue that learning side
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can be extremely beneficial for
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, as it gives them a chance to expand their knowledge outside their main studies.
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, it can help them improve their
study
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skills
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by developing their
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autonomic
learning process, and
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it can help them develop more life
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which can be important in their professional life after.
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, doctors who
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about
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social
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can develop their interpersonal
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understanding
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how to deal with patients in different situations. If,
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, doctors focused only on their medical studies, they would not be able to help their patients as effectively as doctors who developed their social
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. In conclusion,
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some
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think that the only goal in
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is to learn their main
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, I believe that learning more about other things gives
students
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new
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perspectives
and opportunities.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Broaden
  • Perspectives
  • Specialize
  • Critical thinking
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Career success
  • Interdisciplinary connections
  • Structured path
  • Clear goals
  • Creativity
  • Innovation
  • Academic credibility
  • Recognition
  • Balance
  • Exploring
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