Nowadays,
are experiencing a modern and busy
. Several
regard that it is too
for us to be generally joyful. In personal, I agree with
opinion and the following content will list the shortage of modern
.
BusyCorrect article usage
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and restless
will come up with a weaker body. These days,
have become hardworking, in order to obtain a better quality of life.
,
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scientific research,
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endless
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and neglect of rest will lead to the collapse of our body function.
, as a worker sitting in the office from Monday to Friday and more than ten hours per day,
whichCorrect pronoun usage
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not only
causeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the degeneration of the muscular system
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but
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leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to the numbness of
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.
, continuing input pressure and dealing with affairs
are Unnecessary verb
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lead to mental problems.
suffering from
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endless affairs, they will
become
fatigueChange the verb form
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. As they feel tired of anything in their life, they will gradually ignore their relationship
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family and friends.
AtChange the preposition
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the end, they will like
anChange the article
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secluded island which is isolated
toChange preposition
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society.
, all
worksChange the verb form
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and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
are convertChange the verb form
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into occupational machines which knows nothing but work, meanwhile, they
are Verb problem
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lacking ofWrong verb form
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creativity and the
to confront challenge.
BaseWrong verb form
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on
situation, our generation will be owned by the youth which
are correspondChange the verb form
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to the robots, which is
kindCorrect article usage
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of
an Correct article usage
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extinction of human culture.
In conclusion, I agree that
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are sufferedWrong verb form
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from
joylessCorrect article usage
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life because of the modern
.
's body structure
becomeChange the verb form
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weaker,
be sufferedWrong verb form
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from loneliness and mental disease,
lackCorrect word choice
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of thinking without any personal idea. These are the reasons why I disagree with the current
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.