The civic centre will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and compare the two maps.
The pictorial diagram exemplifies the comparison of the floor plan of the existing versus the upcoming renovation to be done in the municipal centre.
Overall
, as we can see the government building will undergo a drastic change after the change in floor plan and design. Moreover
, the Concert Hall and the Shopping Center will remain constant as the earlier meanwhile, shifting the Council Office and the Exhibition Hall.
Firstly
, the facility of the Car Parking will be replaced with the new Theatre Facility. Further
, the Car Parking will be rebuilt perpendicular to the Concert Hall and ,additionally
parking will be upgraded as Open Parking and Underground parking. Following by, the size of the Exhibition room is minimized and will be relocated to the extreme right-hand side corner of the Avenue in place of the Library.
Lastly
, the extra Car Park will be changed into a Hotel and Restaurant consuming the same amount of place whereas
there will be no Library in the future.Submitted by poojapatil0213 on
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