The civic centre will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and compare the two maps.

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The pictorial diagram exemplifies the comparison of the floor plan of the existing versus the upcoming renovation to be done in the municipal centre.

Overall

, as we can see the government building will undergo a drastic change after the change in floor plan and design.

Moreover

, the Concert Hall and the Shopping Center will remain constant as the earlier meanwhile, shifting the Council Office and the Exhibition Hall.

Firstly

, the facility of the Car Parking will be replaced with the new Theatre Facility.

Further

, the Car Parking will be rebuilt perpendicular to the Concert Hall and ,

additionally

parking will be upgraded as Open Parking and Underground parking. Following by, the size of the Exhibition room is minimized and will be relocated to the extreme right-hand side corner of the Avenue in place of the Library.

Lastly

, the extra Car Park will be changed into a Hotel and Restaurant consuming the same amount of place

whereas

there will be no Library in the future.

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