The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The pictures illustrate a number of important changes which took place in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
From the maps,
it is clear that
the most noticeable change that occurred in the town was that of a huge lake. Linking Words
Additionally
, the forest and farmlands had completely disappeared by 2010
In 1990, there was an ancient structure and a forest with rare flora and fauna to the west of the river, and irrigated farmlands to the east. Linking Words
However
, with the construction of a dam wall, those features disappeared beneath a large lake, which Linking Words
also
became a fishing area in 2010.
Looking at the maps in more detail, Linking Words
while
the mountains still existed, the villages in the far east were relocated Linking Words
further
south of the mountains, and a large hotel was built in their place. Meanwhile, a hydroelectric power dam was constructed with a wide range of electricity pylons appearing nearby.Linking Words
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