You recently received a letter from a friend asking for your advice on whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why she will not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea Suggest the typy of job that would be suitable.

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Dear Sam, I am glad to know that you are doing well. I am fine as well.
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with, I want to congratulate you for getting a good score in the Secondary School Certificate examination. You have made me proud and I told my parents about your result.
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, I know you are in a dilemma to decide what you should do now. Considering your financial condition, I would suggest you get a job first
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go to college.
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, If you do not have enough money, you can not enjoy the college life.
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, your father is sick now and being the only offspring you should take care of your family now.
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this
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, if you get a job, you can not only save some money for your
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education but
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can bear the family's expenses.
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, you have mentioned one of your uncles has a restaurant in the city centre and he is asking you to take the manager position, so it is high time for you to accept the opportunity. I hope you will consider my suggestions. Let me know what you have decided. I will pray for your bright future. If you get time please arrange a visit to my house. We will have a gala time together. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Warm regards, Lisa
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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