the diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. summarize the information and make a comparison. Write at least 150 words.

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The diagram illustrates the method which is mainly used to produce the electric power from a hydroelectric power station.
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, it can be seen that some procedures should be carried out in order to get electricity, and the production of it essentially relies on the presence of water and certain
turbines
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.
To begin
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, two reservoirs should be built in different positions, one should be on a high level,
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the other should be on a low level.
In addition
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to that,
turbines
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have two functions, during the day they act as generators that produce electricity and
this
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occurs when river water flows at a high speed
as a result
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of being stored in a high-level reservoir, it enforces the movement of
turbines
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to generate electricity, which is transmitted to the national gird.
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, the function of
turbines
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at night is completely different because they work as pumps, which return water from the low-level tank back to the high-level reservoir for the purpose of continuing the generation of electric power and avoiding stopping the process.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turbines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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