You have recently returned from an afternoon at your public library, and noticed various negative aspects that could be improved upon. Write a letter to the manager of the public library. In your letter: Describe the poor experience you had Include ideas for what the library should change Explain why you feel the library needs alteration Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear manager, I am writing concerning the poor experience I had
while
on a visit to the City Hall library. Being an enthusiast of reading books, I would like to draw your attention to the unorganized bookshelves. To commence, it is vital to arrange the literature in accordance with the sections as it lays an impression on the reader.
In addition
, the furniture in the library looks rusty and creates a creeky noise when moved. For the well-being of the place, I would like to suggest some measures which should be put into effect immediately.
Firstly
, the staff should be well aware of their surroundings and maintain decorum by letting people know to place the available material in the right area.
Secondly
, if possible the chairs should be replaced with other options available so that the readers can focus on reading without any distractions. The city hall library is the only
such
institution in our town,
that is
why the reputation should be well-maintained. Thank you for your consideration and for any
further
questions, feel free to call me on my number - 6477410620 Yours respectfully Harshveer
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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