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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The linear graph exemplifies the several sources of
air
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pollutants
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 expressed in
million
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tonnes
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 in the United Kingdom from the
year
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 1990 to 2005.
Overall
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, the number of
air
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pollutants
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 released from the industry is much higher than other
pollutants
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.
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, there is a significant fall in the total amount of
pollutants
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 from all the sources. In the
year
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 1990, around 7
million
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tonnes
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 of
air
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 contaminants were emitted from all different sources which significantly dropped to approximately 4
million
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tonnes
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 by the
year
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 1999 and
then
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 continued to fall to about 3
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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 of the period. The total amount of
pollutants
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 emitted into the
air
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 gradually reduced to 5
million
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tonnes
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 by 2005.
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, the industry has the highest number of contaminants with 5.5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 gradually declining to 2
million
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tonnes
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 by the
year
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 2005. Despite, transportation, and households the same amount of emissions in the
year
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 1990 but
thereafter
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 there was a slight increase in the number of
pollutants
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 from transport by 1
million
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 by the
year
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 2005,
while
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 household emissions dropped to a negligible level of 0.1
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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 of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million, tonnes, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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