The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The linear graph exemplifies the several sources of
air
pollutants
expressed in
million
tonnes
in the United Kingdom from the
year
1990 to 2005.
Overall
, the number of
air
pollutants
released from the industry is much higher than other
pollutants
.
Moreover
, there is a significant fall in the total amount of
pollutants
from all the sources. In the
year
1990, around 7
million
tonnes
of
air
contaminants were emitted from all different sources which significantly dropped to approximately 4
million
tonnes
by the
year
1999 and
then
continued to fall to about 3
million
tonnes
at the end
of the period. The total amount of
pollutants
emitted into the
air
gradually reduced to 5
million
tonnes
by 2005.
Further
, the industry has the highest number of contaminants with 5.5
million
tonnes
in 1990 gradually declining to 2
million
tonnes
by the
year
2005. Despite, transportation, and households the same amount of emissions in the
year
1990 but
thereafter
there was a slight increase in the number of
pollutants
from transport by 1
million
by the
year
2005,
while
household emissions dropped to a negligible level of 0.1
million
tonnes
at the end
of the period.
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