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The draph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981-2007.

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The line graph illustrates data about the
consumption
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 of three different spreads (
margarine
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, low fat and reduced spreads, and
butter
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) between 1981-2007. Units were measured in
grams
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.
Overall
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, it can be observed that the
consumption
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 of all spreads dramatically dropped all the given
period
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 with the exception of low-fat and reduced spreads. The highest number of
consumption
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 was
butter
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 at the beginning and the smallest fraction was
margarine
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at the end
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 of the
period
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. It is obvious that
butter
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 was a leader among these expenditure spreads at the beginning. After increasing considerably, the number of
butter
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consumption
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 sharply decreased from over 160
grams
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 to 70
grams
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, followed by a slow plunge to 50
grams
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at the end
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 of the
period
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.
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, after fluctuating, there was a
period
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 of stability that the
margarine
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 rate was 100
grams
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 for 5 years.
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, in 2007 the
margarine
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consumption
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 was the lowest among the three spreads (40
grams
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).
On the other hand
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, low fat and reduced spreads commenced in 1996 with the lowest just 10
grams
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However
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 there was a rapid climb to over 80
grams
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 , where
this
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 rate was the biggest than the other two spread consumptions in 2001. After increasing dramatically, there was a slow decrease from over 80 to 70. It is important to note that despite a modest drop the low fat and reduced spread still remained the leader.
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