The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change

in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table illustrates transformation in the proportion of the old community and predictions in the three major countries, namely:
Canada
,
Germany
and the United
Kingdom
. The items are measured in percentages.
Overall
, there are two general trends in the table: upward and steady. Changes are considered in two different time periods.
While
Canada
and
Germany
wenting up in these years, the United
Kingdom
maintained the same level. From 1988 to 2000, in elderly generations increased dramatically by 4.35% and reached 20.67%in
Canada
,
however
there was a plateau and only 0.66% different from percentages of 1988.
Similarly
,
Germany
's changes displayed a significant increase at
this
time period and wenting up from 20.45 to 25.32% In 2030,there will be a remarkable increase which was monitored in previous information.
Although
there was a steadiness in the United
Kingdom
, it is predicted to go up in the next three decades. In the following years, the highest expectation is
Germany
's elderly society because it will be indicated at 30.42% which is the biggest proportion between
Canada
and the United
Kingdom
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage change
  • population
  • aged 65 and above
  • information
  • table
  • data
  • trends
  • patterns
  • comparison
  • predicted
  • future
  • findings
  • comment
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