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people now a days work hard to buy more things. this had made our life more comfortable but it is a pity many tradition values have been lost on the way to such materialism.to what extenet do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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Introduction
The debate
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is wheather
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wheather
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whether
classroom
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the classroom
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 should
be replace
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 by modern media
flims
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films
 and
games
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, computers.
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 multimedia tool
educations
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education
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are
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is
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 interactive and
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engaging
engagging
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engaging
,
its
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it is
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crucial
crutial
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crucial
 to
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prioritize the engagement of books in education.
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Flims,
games
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 and computers have a unique style of education and have their own advantages. Flims can not only provide you with
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information on the
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also
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 provides
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with a clear picture and a concept of the
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 and educates more a visual practical approach,
on the other
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hand
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 computers can not only give you
knowlege
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knowledge
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subject
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 but
also
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 with
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the
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 creative mind
it
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allows you to search the
subject
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/topic
in depth
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 and with the help of
large
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a large
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 database and
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ever-evolving
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ever evolving
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 search engine technology it can provide
with
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mass information
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on the topic and able to provide a vast
knowlege
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knowledge
 to the student. Now coming to
games
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, video
games
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 are a place where you can learn how to speak
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English
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english
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while
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engaging
engagging
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engaging
 in a fun time with
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friends or fellow classmates, various online video
games
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 provide
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a muliplayer
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muliplayer
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multiplayer
 based experience which allows people all over the world to connect with each other and learn more
on
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about
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 communication.
Conclusion
Engagging
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Engaging
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technology based
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technology-based
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 approach on a
subject
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 often highlights motivation and
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also
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is also
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 quite fun for the learners.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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