people now a days work hard to buy more things. this had made our life more comfortable but it is a pity many tradition values have been lost on the way to such materialism.to what extenet do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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whether
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should
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by modern media
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films
and
games
, computers.
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are
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interactive and
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crucial
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to prioritize the engagement of books in education. Flims,
games
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information on the
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computers can not only give you
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knowledge
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also
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allows you to search the
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database and
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search engine technology it can provide
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mass information on the topic and able to provide a vast
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knowledge
to the student. Now coming to
games
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games
are a place where you can learn how to speak
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english
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while
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in a fun time with friends or fellow classmates, various online video
games
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muliplayer
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multiplayer
based experience which allows people all over the world to connect with each other and learn more
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communication.
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