Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Violent crimes are rampant among young ones especially those who

age

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below 18 years old. Most

psychologist

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psychologists

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argue that the main

factors

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for

this

is the lack of social and emotional

learnings

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learning

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of a

child

from their

parents

and

teachers

. I completely agree with the above notion.

This

essay will discuss the reasons for it and its effect on the youngsters.

To begin

with, there are various factors that

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to the increasing cases of violent crimes. Primarily, it started at

home

with their

parents

. Children have been raised by their

parents

at

home

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molded

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them

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to be better as they grow old.

Parents

are the epitome of

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personality and

behaviors

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of a

child

. If they are nurtured well at

home

, they will have good manners and personalities and are

law abiding

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citizens even at a young age. They will be guided well in their journey in life with their

parents

on board.

For instance

, if

parents

are not physically and emotionally present for their

child

, they are more prone to commit a crime since no adult or parent

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there to supervise and guide them in doing what is right

thus

they are

also

not aware of the consequences of their actions. Aside from parental support, education provided in schools plays an important role too for the

behavior

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of a

child

. School is the second

home

for children where what they

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learned at

home

will be more developed and nourished by their

teachers

.

This

is the place where their social needs are met in meeting their classmates,

teachers

or any staff in the school. Respecting each other boundaries and following policies are learned through education. Unfortunately,

teachers

nowadays

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more on the academic achievements of their students

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disregarding the social and emotional support their students

needs

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. They seem

do

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the teaching for the sake of their job so children

has

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a lack of knowledge about good moral values.

To sum up

, I believe that

parents

and

teachers

play a vital role for youngsters

to

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become

a

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better

person

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people

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in the future

thus

avoiding crimes and abiding

rules

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as taught. Both

parents

and

teachers

should provide stronger social and emotional support to the young ones in order to protect them.