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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, some
people
 deserve high
salaries
 because of their curriculum vitae. It is considered by many that gaining a high annual income is good for the country.
In contrast
, some
people
 think it affects the
countries
'
economy
 in a negative way. In my opinion, a high salary is the best way to keep the
people
 who gain high
salaries
 in the country, and I support
this
idea
. On the one hand, many
people
's thoughts are supportive of high
salaries
. Those, who gain high
salaries
 have creative and productive attitudes, which adds
so
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many advantages to
countries
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the country's
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economy
.
Countries
'
economy
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economies
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 expand with the help of
people
, which
are
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add considerable benefits to society and
also
 the
economy
, and these
people
 deserve higher
salaries
 to keep their motivation
in
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 a positive level.
For instance
, Apple and Microsoft have excellent profits
due to
 their co-workers. Behind
of
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this
 success, the companies give high incomes to their co-workers to give them a goal that
increase
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 the companies'
salaries
.
On the other hand
,
other
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others
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ones
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think the equality between
the
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colleagues is
degradated
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degraded
 by high
salaries
.
This
 situation may cause
the
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bad relationships between
the
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co-workers.
As a result
 of that, some think the government has to limit the
salaries
for keeping
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to keep
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 the peace of work. In my opinion,
although
,
this
idea
 comes from
the
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equality,
but
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the
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equality is not ensured by
this
idea
.
On the other hand
, high
salaries
 provide to keep the
people
 who are excellent in their professions in their country. In a nutshell, I support the
idea
 that
high
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 salary is
the
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a
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 great benefit for the
countries
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country's
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 future.
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