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Increasing the petrol prices is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems

#petrol #prices #traffic #pollution
It has been universally
acknoweldged
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acknowledged
 that pollution and traffic crowded is
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escalating
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alarming
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current
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plethora
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reasons
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yet some solution sensible
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available
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available
 to curb grave
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, commencing with the
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causes
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causes
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this
 growth
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 of people
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using
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using
 a car that
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 a lot of pollution ,
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countries
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countries
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of
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transports
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 not
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available
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available
 like
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train , or metro, as
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result
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 own car ,In order to solve
this
 serious issue some
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measures
 can be taken , first the government should play
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 role to organize the movement of cars and transportation available , that can reduce the number of cars , the second solution , people should have the
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 about
this
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cotributing
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contributing
effects and it will has detrimental to society . To recapitulate ,
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unquestionably
,
this
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 of the day ,
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this
governmnt
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government
 and people should come
farward
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forward
 to mitigate
this
 complex issue.
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