Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to study for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There has been an argument among two different groups of people about the suitability of learning another subject alongside what
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study in university. In the current essay, I will explain it
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. I put forward the idea that
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can be helpful in some fields of study. As
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controversial matter, some
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need their own full attention to dedicate to one special topic. As some majors are highly sensitive to even small changes, slight distractions can result in negative repercussions.
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, Nursery is a major which deals with people’s health and their vital signs under absolutely critical
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. In
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case,
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should just try to memorize every single detail of their curricula.
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it more clear, considering a nurse showing intense interest in learning
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language in his workplace, can be stressful for
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family. Mainly because he is prone to make mistakes.
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, it is unnecessary for some
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to expand their knowledge in other fields. On the other side, in some majors which are multidiscipline, adding up more information gained from other subjects
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can be beneficial.
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, Tourism is highly intertwined with other majors
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as Marketing or Hospitality. In these cases,
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have
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privilege to utilize their knowledge in a profitable way.
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, if
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decide to combine new information with their main field, they can gain a higher level of creativity and broaden their horizons in the future.
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, they will have more
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of employment when it comes to their job prospects,
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more job opportunities in the future. In a nutshell, some fields are susceptible to more creativity, and learning another subject would be a great help for
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to improve their critical thinking.
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, in some sensitive subjects taking
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action is less likely to bring a good result
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • broadens
  • cultivates
  • well-rounded
  • fosters
  • versatile
  • interdisciplinary
  • innovative
  • exclusively
  • specialized
  • competence
  • enhancing
  • job prospects
  • competitive market
  • depth
  • breadth
  • educational strategy
  • rapidly changing
  • diverse skill set
  • flexibility
  • adaptability
  • highly specialized
  • crucial
  • expertise
  • qualifications
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