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Some people think children are sucessful in foreingn language studies than adults.To what extent you agree or disagree

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In the midst of
this
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 technology-driven global world knowledge in foreign
languages
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 plays an important role in career opportunities. Some individuals believe that children can manage foreign
language
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 skills more than
adults
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. I strongly agree with the fact that adolescents can easily grab a different
language
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 than grown-ups. There are several factors which support the child to study the foreign
language
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 easily.
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, they are in a developing stage which means their brains are in a growing state that helps them to easily understand and use the
language
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 in an effective way.
Secondly
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, youngsters are free of responsibilities which gives them enough time to involved,understand and learn different
languages
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.
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, learning French will be easier for a youngster than a grown-up individual
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 its complexity.
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,
adults
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 have busy schedules and are more liable for their daily lives.
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, a person who is working
full-timetime
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full-time time
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 will not get enough time to concentrate on their studies.
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, their grasping power will be less than that of young people
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 their credibility towards many factors
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 as family, job and society.
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, their chances to
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 in non-native
languages
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 will be difficult.
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, children are more good at studying than
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due to
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 their physical abilities
as well as
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due to
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 their fewer liabilities at their particular age.
Due to
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 the busy ,schedule
adults
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 would not be getting time to spend learning non-native
languages
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.
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