You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match

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Dear Johny, I hope you are feeling better. There is exciting news for you that our

team

won the championship. The play was harder than we expected.

However

,during the second half, it was favourable for us.Eventually, we achieved our target. Tom in the BBK

team

played well as he secured runs from just 30 balls.

Such

an amazing play, right? There were several factors which made the play harder.

Firstly

, the climate was not good enough, during the first half of play heavy rainfall caused the pitches too wet, which delayed the match.

Secondly

, one of the

team

members in the opponent group had a severe head injury. His condition was a bit serious and he was hospitalized for surgery. Totally, I can say it was a good match for us as you know we won the trophy after 10 years. But we missed you in that match. We expect your powerful comeback on our next match with the TTA

team

. Please make sure you are taking a good rest my dearest friend. Hope I meet you soon. We miss you. With Love, Tony

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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