The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
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The line graph claims daily travel by commuters in the UK, utilizing 3 different types of transportation vehicles over a period of 60 years.
It is clear that
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the
car
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is by far the most popular option of transport in the UK.
Moreover
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, the
number
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of individuals who use cars and trains rose slightly and the
number
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of
bus
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passengers reduced minimally. In 1970 over 4
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people travelled by
car
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in daily life,
on the other hand
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, the
number
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of commuters who used train and
bus
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was between 2 and 4
million
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. In the year 2000, the
number
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of
car
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users saw rapid growth and it reached 7
million
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.
Also
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, the
number
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of
bus
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passengers experienced a small drop of nearly 1
million
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. Between the years 2000 and 2030, the amount of those driving by
car
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will increase enormously to a peak of 9
million
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and it will reach in highest of all time. During
this
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time, the
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of rail passengers will climb to 5
million
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in 2030.
By contrast
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, the quantity of
bus
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utilizers will remain relatively stable, at between 4 and 3
million
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, and it will reach its lowest in the whole 60-year period in the year 2030.
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