The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters

travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph claims daily travel by commuters in the UK, utilizing 3 different types of transportation vehicles over a period of 60 years.
It is clear that
the
car
is by far the most popular option of transport in the UK.
Moreover
, the
number
of individuals who use cars and trains rose slightly and the
number
of
bus
passengers reduced minimally. In 1970 over 4
million
people travelled by
car
in daily life,
on the other hand
, the
number
of commuters who used train and
bus
was between 2 and 4
million
. In the year 2000, the
number
of
car
users saw rapid growth and it reached 7
million
.
Also
, the
number
of
bus
passengers experienced a small drop of nearly 1
million
. Between the years 2000 and 2030, the amount of those driving by
car
will increase enormously to a peak of 9
million
and it will reach in highest of all time. During
this
time, the
number
of rail passengers will climb to 5
million
in 2030.
By contrast
, the quantity of
bus
utilizers will remain relatively stable, at between 4 and 3
million
, and it will reach its lowest in the whole 60-year period in the year 2030.
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