You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

Dear Mr. Hawkins, I am writing to inform you about my appraisal expectations in
this
year's promotion cycle. I have been working hard in our team for the
last
year to achieve a good designation.
To begin
with my achievements, I have provided more than twenty value-adds
along with
satisfactory results to our client.
Additionally
, I have received many recognition awards in the
last
town hall of our account.
Furthermore
, I would love to expand my career with our organization's growth, and I could see myself at a junior manager level in the next 5 years. To achieve consistent growth, I believe that I am eligible for the promotion as a team lead
this
year in our account. To discuss
this
further
, I would like to propose a formal meeting
this
Wednesday afternoon
according to
your convenience. We could have a detailed discussion on potential promotion and role planning. I look forward to a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Ronnie Carter
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