You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In you letter •Correct the information in the acritical •Explain whey its is important for the magazine to vie the correct information •Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to make a formal complaint about incorrect information given in the latest edition of the international travel magazine. The writer described that the University of Cambridge is the oldest in the world

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in ,fact the oldest university in the English-speaking world is Oxford. The University of Cambridge was founded in 1209, but Oxford was known to have existed in 1096. A magazine like yours has an international reputation and is extremely influential with travel companies and individuals alike. It is essential that any advice should be accurate and reliable and I was genuinely surprised that the facts had not been checked prior to publication. I would like to request you to correct the information and an apology in next month's addition. I would

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suggest you ensure that all factual information is thoroughly checked before publication Yours sincerely, Shakir

Submitted by shakirali.mit on Wed Sep 13 2023

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

145 words

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