Write a letter to a book store manager who is living in another city. Ask him/her to make available a book that you are interested in.

Dear Mr. Gupta, I am Deeksha Sharma, one of the frequent buyers of your bookstore. I am writing

this

letter to you regarding a book that I desperately need. The publication that I am looking for is “Physics in a Nutshell” written by one of the renowned physicists of Campbell University. I need

this

book to help students prepare for the annual science championship which is scheduled for December. I understand

this

is a limited edition and hard to acquire but it can be very helpful for the students to have the right study material. I browsed your online website

however

, the item was sold out and since it is only available at your store, I would request you to restock the same. I can either order it online with UPI payment or schedule a pickup service at your store with cash payment as I am staying in a different city. Please let me know the availability of the book and the feasible mode of payment. I am looking forward to a positive response. Yours faithfully, Deeksha Sharma

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