The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Information about the production of five different types of
tea
is presented in a diagram.
Overall
, there are three main stages of production for all five types of
tea
, starting after the growth of the leaves.
In addition
, four of the
tea
variants have two extra steps, each one with a unique combination of steps. The first main step, when the leaves have finished their development, is plucking them. After that, the plucked leaves should be withered. For the production of white
tea
,
this
is the second to
last
step before the final one of oven drying.
In contrast
, for all other types of
tea
, two more actions are needed before reaching
this
final stage. For the making of green
tea
, steaming follows the withering and
then
the leaves get rolled. Rolling is used
also
for the making of oolong
tea
and large-leaf black
tea
, both of which do not need steaming, but the next step varies. For the first one, only slight fermentation is used,
while
the second is left to fermentate fully. Small-leaf black
tea
also
experiences full fermentation, but it is not rolled beforehand. ,
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it is crushed before the final stage of drying.
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