Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that
people
mostly achieve their goals by
a question of luck. Change preposition
through
Due to
fact that in the present time
there are a Add a comma
,time
lot
of youngsters who are reach
their goals in the young ages. Now Change the verb form
are reaching
people
are beginning to realize a lot
of achievements of other people
. Personally, I am disagree
with Change the verb form
disagree
this
statement. Hence
, I will write about my decision for this
statement.
Firstly
, it is well known that nowadays people
become more productive despite their young ages. What I mean here is that teenagers and other young age people
are reach
their own aims a Wrong verb form
reaching
lot
more in comparison of
the past century. One of the main reasons behind Change preposition
to
that is
hard-working
, because Correct word choice
hard
of
what it is looks like unrealistic. A good case in point is teenagers of the present time, who are more confident Change preposition
apply
for
their actions.
Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, it can also
be argued that people
can not see the tough way, which they pass through tears and pain. That is
to say mostly
Correct your spelling
most
someone
Change noun form
people's
achievement
Fix the agreement mistake
achievements
is seems
Wrong verb form
seem
like
impossible for Change preposition
apply
the
others, so it seems like they reach their aims only by a question of luck. Take Correct article usage
apply
for example
successful and young millionaires who's achievements looks
like impossible for others.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that a Change the verb form
look
lot
of people
achieve their aims because their
hardworking and productive skills, which is the only way to reach our goals.Change preposition
of their
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