Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Ecommerce
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E-commerce
plays a major role in
morden
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the modern
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period
people
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use
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to buy
food
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online. It is
increase
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increasing
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day by day . But
majority
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the majority
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of
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food
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the food
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they
use
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to buy is not fresh or either
rippen
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ripped
off . Online shopping of
vegitable
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vegetable
vegetables
is
increreas
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increasing
now
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nowadays
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a days as working one
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use
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uses
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to buy
food
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through
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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.
they
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They
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dont have
time
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to go to the
super market
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supermarket
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to purchase them .
Although
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it is very
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time consuming
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time-consuming
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and helpful . Most of the
web sites
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websites
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and
company
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companies
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insure
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ensure
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delivery
withing
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within
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the day itself or in 24 Hours . The companies are providing Job
Opportunites
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opportunities
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for the jobless. It must
be increase
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be increased
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in
devoloping
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developing
countries . Online shopping does not
needs
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need
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to
be grow
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grow
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in
a
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apply
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high demand because the items they sell are not fresh . They
are
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do
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not
caring
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care
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of
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about
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the
food
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and are
enabled
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unable
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to deliver us the best item . They
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use
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used
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to keep the item in
storage
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a storage
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house for a long period of
time
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.
Which
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This
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makes the
vegitables
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vegetables
and fruits unhealthy
due to
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the rise of
the
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apply
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"Bacteria"
on
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in
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them . Can cause
one
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apply
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a
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apply
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major health
issue
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issues
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to
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apply
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one
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apply
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. They don't allow economic growth of the farmer or the owner of the market . Companies buy
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the product
a product
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product
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products
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directly from the
contracter
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contractor
or the shipper of the
food
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which
donot
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do not
allow any third party to
interfare
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interfere
. He
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use
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used
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to buy
product
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products
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at a very low rate and resell them
on
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at
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a high rate which does not allow them to grow economically . In
conclusion
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we must say that ecommerce should be practised by those who are not
abe
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able
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to take
time
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out of their busy schedule . In order to take care of
ones
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health we must go to the supper market and purchase them directly from there itself .
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