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THE CHART SHOWS THE NUMBER OF WORKING HOURS PER WEEK, IN INDUSTRIAL SECTOR, IN 4 EUROPEAN COUNTRIES IN 2002

THE CHART SHOWS THE NUMBER OF WORKING HOURS PER WEEK, IN INDUSTRIAL SECTOR, IN 4 EUROPEAN COUNTRIES IN 2002
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The bar charts depict information about how much percentage of workers had
the
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 specific range of working
hours
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 in a week in four European countries in the year 2002.
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, the maximum group in Denmark, Sweden and the UK worked for 36 to 40
hours
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whereas
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 in France it was between 31 and 35
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 with, In Denmark and Sweden, the most prominent working
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was
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 36 to 40
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 constituting around 70 to 80 per cent of people. In the former, approximately 25%
people
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of people
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 worked for 31-35
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 and in the latter, it was about 39%. Employees working in other working
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 in both countries stayed the same with an approximate figure of less than 20%. It is evident that the majority of the employees worked around 36 to 40
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 in the UK
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 in France it was around 31 to 35
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,working
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range
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 36 to 40 was the second most
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 where 40 per cent perform their tasks. The Percentage of employees in the remaining working
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 in the UK was less than 20 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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