The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The given line charts demonstrate information regarding households owning electrical facilities and
time
spent on chores in one specific country in the
time
span of 1920 to 2019. As an overview,
besides
the first 20 years of
this
decade, the highest rate of ownership among these given electrical appliances belongs to the refrigerator.
In addition
, the vacuum cleaner found its popularity in 2019 and the ownership percentage of it becomes equivalent to the Refrigerator.
Also
,the
hours
spent on house chores have their highest number at the beginning of the period
this
figure shows a striking downward trend to the end of the given
time
period. As it can be observed, at the beginning of the
time
span having a washing machine was much more popular among
householders
than the other two mentioned facilities with 40% of their
population
.
However
, there is a negligible difference in percentage which is 10% between
this
supply and vacuum cleaner.
In contrast
, there is a noticeable difference between the amount of ownership of refrigerators and Washing machines which Washing machines took over with approximately 40% more
population
. At
this
time
households spend the highest amount of
time
on housework with 50
hours
per week. Onward 1920, washing machines fluctuated during the given
time
span and lost their popularity among
householders
with nearly 71% of the
population
.
Conversely
, both the refrigerator and vacuum cleaner figures had been experiencing striking increases in
population
between 1940 and 2019 until they both reached 100% of
householders
. Meanwhile,
this
mentioned
time
period of
hours
spent by
householders
on house chores experienced a significant decline until it reached roughly 10
hours
per week in 2019.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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