In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All over the world,
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number of people are becoming more interested in knowing about
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of their household or apartment.There are plenty of reasons for
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the mentioned
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topic but the best way
for building
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to build
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the
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knowledge about their habitants'
history
is
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in
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websites and
connect
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with old
member
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members
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of their
nighberhood
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neighbourhood
. Knowing about the
history
of
household
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a household
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residental
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place, in my idea
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arised
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from curiosity and of
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the
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curiosity is one of the most important features of being human,
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it is not surprising when you see a new member of your town
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is full of energy for finding out about every
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of her/his
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residential
place.
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when my father wanted to buy his
house
he researched
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every ex-owner of his
house
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himself that he decided to buy
a
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right
house
. For aknowledgment about past happening events
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your
house
,
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believe,
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way is reaching out for
cennection
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connection
with old people in your
neighberhood
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neighbourhood
and for second best way
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can think about surfing
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websites
even
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social
medias
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for extra and
beneficail informations
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beneficial information
.
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you probably can get familiar with your
house
history
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websites in which you can search about every feature of
nighberhoods
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neighbourhoods
in your town. In
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having motivation for knowing about your past houses' events is a worldwide thing,
also
it is not a new phenomenon but
also
in every period of time people investigate about where they want to live and
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there are plenty of sites and ways for
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researching
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mentioned in above text.
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  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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