The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart illustrates the number of people (
men
, women, children) who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables for a single day in the United Kingdom between 2001 to 2008
Moreover
, the consumption of food
is slowly increasing throughout the years. The food
taken by the children and men
is mostly similar. In addition
, women consume slightly high compared to others.
In the beginning, from the year
2001 to 2003 the consumption of food
by children was constant. it slightly moves upward in the year
2004 to 2007 . Dude for some reason the the line comes down in the year
2008. men
consume food
overall
20 % till the year
2004. Then
like the kids men
also
started eating more in the significant years of 2006 and 2007 .
Furthermore
, compared to others women ate more than others. From the beginning till the ,end they consume food
in high percentage.Their intake of food
comes under 25 to 35 per cent. 35 % is the highest percentage. After ,that it slightly decreased to 30 over the period of 2006 to 2008.Submitted by insighttribez on
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